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Good, but theres always room to improve.

I liked your "Drunken Stick" better imo. Your use of originality is great tho, and i like the fact that i see different stick fighting styles from you, compared to what I've seen from most of the stick world. Keep it up.

If i had one critique, it would be less text, and if there is text, make somthing happening as its showing up on screen. There's nothing more boring in a stick movie, then text with no motion.

Animations fluid and it looks better with the straighter line style. Good sound too. Smoke effects were my favorite.

Keep aiming higher and I'll forever be a viewer. Creativity at its best i say.

Hyun responds:

thanks! I'll see if I can ease a little down on the text next time.

woot ape :D

I thought it was quite entertaining. Dancing stick dudes always makes me smile. I was more than happy to convert it for ya.

ape4 responds:

Hey dude, its all your excellent inspiration

Not bad

Wish the tempo was a little faster, but for the most part the animations were smooth and entertaining. Well done all of you. Keep making more.

Also where's Collab 1, 2 and 3?

therealsora responds:

look for it on youtube.

If egorapter made mga4 this would be it.

You captured the old Awesome movies flare perfectly. Faved and top 5'ved.

secondstamp responds:

Hey, thanks man. I'm glad I did, then.

Bad presentation

And if you didn't know how to use flash then you should't of put it into a flash until you figured it out. The presentation of your work is terrible, and thats just as important. Its like your saying, heres my work, then you spit on it. How do you expect others to give you respect for your pivots, if you don't present it respectfully.

I don't care if you didn't know how to use flash, you figure it out before you hand it out to the public. Don't come up with excuses as to why it looks bad just to get others to pity you and vote higher.

Also now we can't include your the skate animation into the main movie of our collab because you put it on here. Seriously wtf.

Lastly this isn't a collab, its a compilation of just your work. A collab is when a team effort is made to make one giant project.

4NeverDead responds:

thanks for the honest review narf.

But im taking this down anyway to fix it my friend helped me with my flash skills and i realized it wasnt a comp when i uploaded it so ill fix it and take out the skate animation

Great presentation

It was wonderful too look at. You captured the cinematic feel to it extremely well.

I wished the animation was more in depth tho. The movie was too action pacted to have such stiffness. It didn't kill your overall score tho and its still good fun to watch. Up the animation quality and my review will be a 10.

Good luck with your further work.

Kuoke responds:

Thanks.

awww

Hope your girlfriends doing well bud :)

Nice message and you put a good deal of effort into the artwork which is nice to see.

Not bad dude. Lost points for the lack of animation quality but i really doubt it matters.

Ticketyt0ck responds:

Thanks, I wish I could have incorporated more animation as well.

future advice

you need a preloader, pivot flashes will become very large very fast, so it helps to have a loader so people wont be impatient.

don't resize the gif file once you've moved the movie clip onto the screen. The quality will get destroyed if you do.

the generic white background is tough on the eyes

Take your time on the next one. Don't be get over anxious and throw the next one out so quick. Take your time, and make it look more organized.

I didn't expect you to submit so soon.

Good luck.

wjimmyw responds:

well i actually made these a while ago so i kinda will have to put them on any way but im gonna make a good one soon with a background and stuff.

go reno!

that drum set wasn't finished much but glad u liked it enough to use it lol.

Maybe next time you can include quick info of what pivot is at the starting, so people know what it is.

TheReno responds:

Probably would be helpful xD

I love you

I really do. Nice work.

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Hey, it's Narfy-boy! Thanks for the review.

If your reading this, it means your no longer alive.

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